So here I pack my bag and leave you
Leave you behind me and move on
Move on to a land of my dreams
My dreams that once revolved around you!
Around you I feel suffocated and betrayed
Betrayed is what I felt the fateful day
The day it all rolled out in front of me
Of me nothing left that day, a hollow stayed
Stayed with me your memories for long
For long I pulled at the pieces that were once one
Once one piece fell, the puzzle stays incomplete
Incomplete my life was without you for long
For long I carried the baggage of emotions
Of emotions that once meant the world
The world was a long stretch away from here
From here I finally move on leaving behind the emotions
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Beautiful leaving behind the bag of emotions that are stopping you to move ahead in life and hampering your happiness.
Magnificently penned
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Thank you 😊
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Wow ! this poem touched me to the core.
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Thank you 😊
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Oh, what a finale.
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Thank you 😊
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Love the poem and the structure… Very nice!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautiful write up… Only when we leave emotions behind, we can move forward..
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True that, we have to leave our past behind to move ahead 😊 thank you
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Beautiful writing 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Omg
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😊
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Nicely presented. The baggage of the past is light compared to that of the future.
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Thank you
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You are welcome.
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There is tremendous strength in this poem. Truly touching. And I like very much what some of the others had to say as well.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautiful.. loved the word game here.. 😇👌🏼
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Thank you so much 😊 I tried that for the first time
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And you did it beautifully Yamini.. 😇💕
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Bazen olur !
Sözlerin bitince harflerini toplayıp evine dönersin, kalbine…
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teşekkür ederim
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Beautiful!❤️
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OMG!! I loved it Yamini. Beautiful! So glad I stopped in to read this.
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Thank you so much 😊 and I am so happy that you dropped by!!
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You’re welcome. Me too.
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what a great post.shared on my blog.love what you created.so deeply relate.
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Thank you so much 😊
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