Baggage

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So here I pack my bag and leave you
Leave you behind me and move on
Move on to a land of my dreams
My dreams that once revolved around you!

Around you I feel suffocated and betrayed
Betrayed is what I felt the fateful day
The day it all rolled out in front of me
Of me nothing left that day, a hollow stayed

Stayed with me your memories for long
For long I pulled at the pieces that were once one
Once one piece fell, the puzzle stays incomplete
Incomplete my life was without you for long

For long I carried the baggage of emotions
Of emotions that once meant the world
The world was a long stretch away from here
From here I finally move on leaving behind the emotions

33 Comments Add yours

  1. Amit Rana says:

    https://wp.me/paMnvJ-N
    Photon and heat relationship

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  2. Beautiful leaving behind the bag of emotions that are stopping you to move ahead in life and hampering your happiness.
    Magnificently penned

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  3. Simmi says:

    Wow ! this poem touched me to the core.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Like

  4. Michelle says:

    Beautifully written!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  5. Love the poem and the structure… Very nice!

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Chiru says:

    Beautiful write up… Only when we leave emotions behind, we can move forward..

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Yamini says:

      True that, we have to leave our past behind to move ahead ๐Ÿ˜Š thank you

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  7. Beautiful writing ๐Ÿ™‚

    Liked by 3 people

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Like

  8. Nicely presented. The baggage of the past is light compared to that of the future.

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      1. You are welcome.

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  9. There is tremendous strength in this poem. Truly touching. And I like very much what some of the others had to say as well.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

  10. Beautiful.. loved the word game here.. ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿผ

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š I tried that for the first time

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      1. And you did it beautifully Yamini.. ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ’•

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  11. idil idilce says:

    Bazen olur !
    Sรถzlerin bitince harflerini toplayฤฑp evine dรถnersin, kalbineโ€ฆ

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    1. Yamini says:

      teลŸekkรผr ederim

      Like

  12. Nahid Khan says:

    Beautiful!โค๏ธ

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  13. OMG!! I loved it Yamini. Beautiful! So glad I stopped in to read this.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š and I am so happy that you dropped by!!

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      1. You’re welcome. Me too.

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  14. what a great post.shared on my blog.love what you created.so deeply relate.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much ๐Ÿ˜Š

      Liked by 1 person

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