Breathing In The Sky

A vast sky floats above me
Staying so close yet flying very far
So quaint and pretty without a scar

How it envelopes me from above
Does it belong to me or is it free
I wonder if it softly kisses the tree

Of all the blues it could be
It chose to live them all
From a serene river to a fire ball

Is it the hue that attracts me
Or the chirpy birds in their poise
Maybe it is the calmness in the noise!

21 Comments Add yours

  1. Simmi says:

    Ah! a nice poem.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

  2. Hummingbird says:

    lovely site! It all frames your beautiful and honest poetry so well. πŸ™‚

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Like

      1. Hummingbird says:

        It is deserved πŸ™‚

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  3. You have a gift. Nice and revealing.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  4. MOMENTS says:

    Beautiful poem. I like content. structure in rhyming stanzas and flow. Thank you so much for the follow. I really appreciate this!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      It was lovely visiting your blog and thank you for dropping by 😊 I hope you like more of my work

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      1. MOMENTS says:

        Sure. Will continue to follow your lovely work. I am flattered that you like my humble blog. To be honest, I would prefer you to check out my friend Mario Savioni’s blog because he is a far better writer than me. He is currently writing a novel where he poses the question of a possible love relationship between. 54-year-old man, Frank, and Nicole, a young woman who is only 19. This is the link to his last chapter, which I so strongly recommend: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-8/

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      2. Yamini says:

        I would surely give it a read

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      3. MOMENTS says:

        Thank you so much! You have no idea of how important this is to me and to Mario, of course. 😊

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  5. Devinder Sharma says:

    Beautiful.
    So close to Nature.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

  6. Clare Pooley says:

    You write well; I like this poem and the others I’ve read this evening. Thank you very much for visiting my blog and for the follow.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for dropping by 😊 I am glad you liked my work

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  7. Very beautiful writing as always. Thank you kindly.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  8. Susi Bocks says:

    The imagery, flow of the words and volume in the description of the sky, so amazing. Well done, Yamini!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Susi Bocks says:

        You’re very welcome! πŸ™‚

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