I miss the days when we were complete
Complete as a family, tightly sewn together
Complete with emotions, anger and love doing their part
Complete to the soul, never falling apart
But what lies ahead of me is a scary void
Void that leaves me craving for what I once resented
Void that engulfs me bit by bit each day
Void in my life that I can only dream of filling one dayβ¦
Beautiful poem π
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Thank you π
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Painful. It brought a sad smile on my face
Enigma π
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Pain is a part of life!!
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I know. π
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Some voids can never be filled, not even at the atomic level. We should never be cocky about something, because the ground is a bit haunching. βΊοΈβΊοΈ
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I agree with you
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It’s a reality, good receives goodness eventually, just a bit of patience is needed, and a cocky person gets facelong crash, and gets trapped in a never ceasing bog.
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Try reading and commenting on others blog too, it encourages a person. π
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Yea sure, I do that but I’ll try to improve on that aspect. Thank you for your suggestion.
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Tbh, you should be, otherwise people who genuinely read your stuffs and likes it most of the time, will naturally expect you to read ones posts, probably expect a like or comment otherwise they will curse you and leave you in despair.
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Arent you hinting at your own blog?? You could have directly invited me to your blog
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I don’t really do that, other people after few likes and comment generally visit and give their feedback.
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I would have done it myself… but thanks for reminding me that if I dont you’d leave my blog in despair
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It would not affect you tbh, just one less genuine like that’s it. If you compare my first genuine like it was on 27 may I think, now its July 20,see my likes and few comments, I was then into blogging frequently.
Thats it.
Peace. βοΈ
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Beautiful I love it.
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome!
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Touching and relevant to me
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Thank you dear…
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I like the repetition of “complete” and then “void.”
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Thank you π
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Craving for what I once resented… Ironic!!!
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Yea… π
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Beautifully written
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Thank you dear π
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My pleasure yamini
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How beautiful those days were!!
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Indeed the best!
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