A Complete Void

I miss the days when we were complete
Complete as a family, tightly sewn together
Complete with emotions, anger and love doing their part
Complete to the soul, never falling apart

But what lies ahead of me is a scary void
Void that leaves me craving for what I once resented
Void that engulfs me bit by bit each day
Void in my life that I can only dream of filling one day…

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29 Comments Add yours

  1. Ben Aqiba says:

    Beautiful poem πŸ™‚

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  2. Enigma says:

    Painful. It brought a sad smile on my face
    Enigma πŸ™‚

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    1. Yamini says:

      Pain is a part of life!!

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      1. Enigma says:

        I know. πŸ˜‰

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  3. aquibview says:

    Some voids can never be filled, not even at the atomic level. We should never be cocky about something, because the ground is a bit haunching. ☺️☺️

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    1. Yamini says:

      I agree with you

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      1. aquibview says:

        It’s a reality, good receives goodness eventually, just a bit of patience is needed, and a cocky person gets facelong crash, and gets trapped in a never ceasing bog.

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      2. aquibview says:

        Try reading and commenting on others blog too, it encourages a person. πŸ˜‡

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      3. Yamini says:

        Yea sure, I do that but I’ll try to improve on that aspect. Thank you for your suggestion.

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      4. aquibview says:

        Tbh, you should be, otherwise people who genuinely read your stuffs and likes it most of the time, will naturally expect you to read ones posts, probably expect a like or comment otherwise they will curse you and leave you in despair.

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      5. Yamini says:

        Arent you hinting at your own blog?? You could have directly invited me to your blog

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      6. aquibview says:

        I don’t really do that, other people after few likes and comment generally visit and give their feedback.

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      7. Yamini says:

        I would have done it myself… but thanks for reminding me that if I dont you’d leave my blog in despair

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      8. aquibview says:

        It would not affect you tbh, just one less genuine like that’s it. If you compare my first genuine like it was on 27 may I think, now its July 20,see my likes and few comments, I was then into blogging frequently.
        Thats it.
        Peace. ✌️

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  4. Beautiful I love it.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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      1. You’re welcome!

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  5. @vapor_sage says:

    Touching and relevant to me

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you dear…

      Liked by 1 person

  6. I like the repetition of “complete” and then “void.”

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  7. swalia says:

    Craving for what I once resented… Ironic!!!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Yea… 😊

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  8. shriyawaves says:

    Beautifully written

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you dear 😊

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      1. shriyawaves says:

        My pleasure yamini

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  9. How beautiful those days were!!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Indeed the best!

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