“Good girls don’t make bold fashion statements.”
“She’s just asking for attention!”
“Strutting around her stuff like that in a party, she has no shame!”
“She tripped over that broken glass, must be dead drunk!”
“That little pouch she has, I know what she’s getting high on!”
“Look at that guy hugging her, I bet she’s hooking up with him.”
“He whispered in her ear, I knew she was a peddler.”
“She’s leaving with another guy, she’ll do anything for money!”
Dawn breaks on her cut up body miles away
No witness to testify against the man who led her out
Her husband walks a free man…the last man to see her last
Why?
She deserved her end for she was a girl in red heels!
Just too good! The way you ended the post and it was all in such a wonderful story like manner! One can’t help falling in love with your writing! Just too good! ✨✨
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Thank you so much 🙂 I am happy to know you liked it so much!
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This was a brilliant read and a mirror to the prejudiced society where we are living.
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Yes, people’s judgments are sometimes so wrong and damaging!
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Exactly, and the worst part is they dont even know or care that their crazy judgement can hamper or damage someone life.
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So true…they never realize!
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Powerful!
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Thank you!
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People never put themselves in the other person’s shoes. How would they like to be judged and misunderstood?
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We never think from that point of view!
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Unfortunately, we don’t. If we did, there would be fewer or no judgmental people in the world.
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That would be the ideal world
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For 12,000 Or so
Years Since the
Start of ‘Toxic
Patriarchy’
As Agriculture
Begins Sitting STiLL
With Greed Hoarding
GrainS in Jealousy
Of Larger Silos is it
Any Surprise that
‘Man’ ATTeMPTS
To Cover And
Trap (God) Love
In Idols Statues
Of Words And Put
(Woman) in PriSoN
Then Too No For
This is
When
Divorce of
Human Wed to Naked
Nature of God Starts
Now These Toxic
‘Man-Made-
CuLTuRES/
ReLiGioNS
Eat Nature and
Our Nature of God
The Face of Our Nature
Our Home our EartH
The ‘ManMade’
Zombie 🧟♂️
Apocalypse
Unfolding
Now As
Nature
Fights
Back Meek
With A Whisper
Of Wrath out of
A Bat Cave too
Small
To
See
Indeed
DarK
Horse
KaRMaNoW
‘Sins of the Fathers’
Veils oF iGNoRaNCE
UnCoVeReD ReVeaLeD…
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I loved the last bit
Sins of the fathers, veils of ignorance
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Thanks Yamini…
Very inspiring Poem😁🙌
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Thank you so much 😊
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SMiLes..
Welcome🕺😊
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I….don’t have words. I….WOW. You are gifted at writing Yamini, truly♥️
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Thank you so much Ishita 🙂 Your comments are also so encouraging!
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♥️♥️🌷
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Wow – impressive writing. So powerful in so few words.
Thanks for the follow too!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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You’re most welcome. I’m looking forward to getting the chance to read more of your work.
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I’d be happy to see you around here 🙂
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