Let Me Breathe

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Trapped in my body I writhe in pain
Choke me but what have you got to gain

…Let me breathe in the rain, in the rain

Beaten thoughts are weeping out my brain
Like life sucked out and washed in the drain

…Let me breathe in the rain, in the rain

Tired with thoughts going round in a chain
They bruise my heart and leave a stain

…Let me breathe in the rain, in the rain

11 Comments Add yours

  1. Kranti says:

    Beautifully penned! Deep and full of raw emotions!!

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Liked by 1 person

      1. Kranti says:

        My pleasure 😊

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  2. In the rain where life begins again
    In the rain where the mad can again be sane
    Yes in the rain where no sin can rein
    May all you are remain
    In the rain may you be new again.

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Yamini says:

      Wow, love these words… It furthers my piece beautifully. Thank you 😊

      Like

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

  3. Simmi says:

    Wow i really loved it and keep up the good work

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Like

  4. Manic Sylph says:

    Beautiful and lyrical 💗

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Liked by 1 person

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