I Am Alive

You have sucked life out of my eyes, my soul and my existence. Now I float above the ocean like world as a dead body would. My eyes are still open but they are frozen pearls with no tears in them. My heart is still beating but feels nothing. My brain is alive and well but I do not think anymore. My mouth opens to eat but not lets out noise. I am hurt but I feel no pain. I exist in this world as bones and flesh not a personality with thoughts and dreams. I am alive but not living.

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  1. macalder02 says:

    Se non siamo così bravi per andare in paradiso o così male per andare all’inferno, allora siamo morti nella vita. Niente come leggere un poema così buono in un sabato piovoso.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Sono d’accordo con la tua idea. 😊 Grazie per l’apprezzamento.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thanks 😊

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  2. GILDASPOEMS says:

    beautiful depth, and right there at the end is the beginning of life anew…

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    1. Yamini says:

      Very well said, it is at the end where a new life starts but most of us can’t hang on till that moment!

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      1. GILDASPOEMS says:

        Well then Yamini, I will send a prayer up to heaven for them & you this day, for many blessings! 🙏😌

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      2. Yamini says:

        I hope it reaches where it is needed the most!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  3. Thanks for your poem. It was well written.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  4. Chiru says:

    So deep and powerful…

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  5. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    PASSIONATE POETRY!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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