Poetry

Breathing In The Sky

Posted by Yamini on

A vast sky floats above me
Staying so close yet flying very far
So quaint and pretty without a scar

How it envelopes me from above
Does it belong to me or is it free
I wonder if it softly kisses the tree

Of all the blues it could be
It chose to live them all
From a serene river to a fire ball

Is it the hue that attracts me
Or the chirpy birds in their poise
Maybe it is the calmness in the noise!

21 Comments Add yours

  1. Simmi says:
    March 6, 2019 at 12:43 pm

    Ah! a nice poem.

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 6, 2019 at 1:37 pm

      Thank you 😊

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  2. Hummingbird says:
    March 6, 2019 at 5:27 pm

    lovely site! It all frames your beautiful and honest poetry so well. 🙂

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 3:32 am

      Thank you so much 😊

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      1. Hummingbird says:
        March 7, 2019 at 4:03 am

        It is deserved 🙂

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  3. pick1solution says:
    March 6, 2019 at 7:24 pm

    You have a gift. Nice and revealing.

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 3:31 am

      Thank you 😊

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  4. MOMENTS says:
    March 6, 2019 at 7:57 pm

    Beautiful poem. I like content. structure in rhyming stanzas and flow. Thank you so much for the follow. I really appreciate this!

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 3:33 am

      It was lovely visiting your blog and thank you for dropping by 😊 I hope you like more of my work

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      1. MOMENTS says:
        March 7, 2019 at 11:42 am

        Sure. Will continue to follow your lovely work. I am flattered that you like my humble blog. To be honest, I would prefer you to check out my friend Mario Savioni’s blog because he is a far better writer than me. He is currently writing a novel where he poses the question of a possible love relationship between. 54-year-old man, Frank, and Nicole, a young woman who is only 19. This is the link to his last chapter, which I so strongly recommend: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-8/

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      2. Yamini says:
        March 7, 2019 at 12:24 pm

        I would surely give it a read

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      3. MOMENTS says:
        March 7, 2019 at 1:53 pm

        Thank you so much! You have no idea of how important this is to me and to Mario, of course. 😊

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  5. Devinder Sharma says:
    March 6, 2019 at 11:57 pm

    Beautiful.
    So close to Nature.

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 3:30 am

      Thank you 😊

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  6. Clare Pooley says:
    March 7, 2019 at 12:09 am

    You write well; I like this poem and the others I’ve read this evening. Thank you very much for visiting my blog and for the follow.

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 3:29 am

      Thank you so much for dropping by 😊 I am glad you liked my work

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  7. Anne Copeland says:
    March 7, 2019 at 3:33 am

    Very beautiful writing as always. Thank you kindly.

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 7, 2019 at 4:26 am

      Thank you 😊

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  8. Susi Bocks says:
    March 19, 2019 at 12:03 am

    The imagery, flow of the words and volume in the description of the sky, so amazing. Well done, Yamini!

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    1. Yamini says:
      March 19, 2019 at 3:46 am

      Thank you so much 😊

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      1. Susi Bocks says:
        March 19, 2019 at 3:53 am

        You’re very welcome! 🙂

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