A Drop Of Demise

Drop by drop it lands on me
I shiver, I wriggle, I flutter

Drop by drop it tickles me
I jerk, I jiggle, I jolt

Drop by drop it takes me back in time
I twist, I turn, I toss

Drop by drop it engulfs me
I gasp, I gulp, I pant

Drop by drop it bites into me
I throb, I sting, I burn

Drop by drop it drains me out
I writhe, I squirm, I thrash

Drop by drop it finishes me
I inhale, I exhale and then I expire

22 Comments Add yours

  1. Simmi says:

    Impressive! I really like your use of words.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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      1. ivor20 says:

        Drop by drop, it revives me
        I sip, I smile, I Breathe
        Thank you for following my blog/website, muchly appreciated, I hope you enjoy reading my humble writings, and I’m from Geelong, Australia. Cheers. Ivor

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      2. Yamini says:

        It was lovely to drop by your blog

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      3. ivor20 says:

        I’m you enjoyed my words 😉😁

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  2. True. This is brilliant!! 🙂

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  3. Beyond perfection! I can FEEL THIS! Powerful.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you for the lovely feedback 😊

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      1. It is my absolute pleasure and delight.

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  4. David Redpath says:

    Word by word, this piece intrigued me 😎

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    1. Yamini says:

      Haha thank you 😊

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  5. Wow, this felt so very beautiful to read!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  6. Really love this! Fun rhyme!

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  7. Your poetry is truly exquisitely lyrical and flows like a stream. You are a very talented young woman.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for the kind words, it means a lot 😊

      Like

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

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