The Anticipated Touch

I went to meet him, talk it all out and get it over with but things took a different turn. He is making me recline on a chair and fixes me a long hard gaze; I am melting under his eyes. He starts fiddling with my nose, as it wobbles just like a rabbit’s! He traces my lips lightly and I open my mouth, giving way to him. My breath increases pace as his hands slide over my bosom. I look at him, his calm stance in contrast to the myriad thoughts and feelings enveloping me. He asks me to turn over and bare my back, my breathing quickens at the mere thought! I sense his hands moving away from my spine and for a second I freeze in my place. I want to stop it all, unsure if my body will give in to his orders. I am hearing his voice, he wants to feel me breathing, DEEPLY. Do I give in or do I not? Right and wrong blurring and before I can register, he is done with me!

Too much anticipation and too little result, that was my physician checking me for symptoms of congestion… but what were you thinking?


15 Comments Add yours

  1. Lovely anticipation and mind reading post

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  2. brijkaulblog says:

    wonderful mind blogging post. I loved it and my heart beat increased at every every word that grappled to keep the flow on.

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  3. @vapor_sage says:

    Haha, You got me, very good!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Mission accomplished 😊 thank you

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    1. Yamini says:

      Hehe… that was the plan!!


  4. Beautiful. I love it. I wasn’t sure what to think. Awesome piece. You keep getting better with each piece you write. I love the element of anticipation in this one.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊 your words motivate me

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      1. You’re so welcome.

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  5. 😁 You got me. Cute post.

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