Poetry

If I, Will You?

Posted by Yamini on

If I take a step forward, will you do the same?
If I stretch my hand out, will you hold it firm?
If I fall behind you, will you come back for me?
If I lose myself to you, will you cherish me forever?

Let me go on forever like this asking you questions
If only you promise me to answer only in a yes!

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30 Comments Add yours

  1. Abhijith Padmakumar says:
    October 5, 2017 at 4:17 am

    Awesome post Yamini 😊. I just loved it 👍👍

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 4:24 am

      Thank you 😊

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      1. Abhijith Padmakumar says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:27 am

        You are welcome my friend 😊. If you can please do visit my blog and give me your 100% honest opinion about it. It would be really helpful 😊

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      2. Yamini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:37 am

        Surely 😊

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      3. Abhijith Padmakumar says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:38 am

        Thanks a lot Yamini 😊

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  2. shalini says:
    October 5, 2017 at 4:34 am

    Very beautiful

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 4:37 am

      Thank you 😊

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      1. shalini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:38 am

        But guys never say yes all the time to all the questions unless we trick them…

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      2. Yamini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:47 am

        Haha… I like the idea… 😉

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      3. shalini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 4:50 am

        Hahaha… I used to do that.. When I was in a relationship the guy got so used to listening me talk so he just pretended to hear and I would try to slip in the questions I want a yes for… But I got caught many times too 😉😉

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      4. Yamini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 5:12 am

        That must have been fun!! 😉

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      5. shalini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 5:14 am

        Well… It was till it stopped working and then it was no fun.. Led to a lot of fights.. Maybe someday I will find someone who says yes to me hehehe 😉😉

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      6. Yamini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 5:17 am

        Yea I hope you get the man and his ‘yes’

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      7. shalini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 5:19 am

        Aww how sweet and thank you… I hope so too

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      8. Yamini says:
        October 5, 2017 at 5:36 am

        😊

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  3. foodzesty says:
    October 5, 2017 at 6:16 am

    Wow!!! beautiful

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 7:25 am

      Thank you 😊

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  4. kawsreflections says:
    October 5, 2017 at 8:48 am

    Beautiful!

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 8:55 am

      Thank you 😊

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      1. kawsreflections says:
        October 5, 2017 at 8:58 am

        You’re welcome!

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  5. Zara says:
    October 5, 2017 at 10:04 am

    Beautiful 🙂

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 10:26 am

      Thank you 😊

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  6. The passionate learner :) says:
    October 5, 2017 at 2:40 pm

    So beautiful…I think today is the day when I read many good posts..

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 5, 2017 at 4:56 pm

      Thank you 😊 I hope your day went well

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  7. Poetrywolf™site says:
    October 6, 2017 at 9:17 am

    Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes For sure Love it Poetry Wolf

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 6, 2017 at 5:32 pm

      😊

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  8. hati03nisa says:
    October 6, 2017 at 9:49 pm

    So so so beautiful

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 7, 2017 at 3:42 am

      Thank you so much 😊

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  9. Chrissy Day says:
    October 15, 2017 at 12:14 pm

    This made me think of my husband. He is such a good guy. Thanks for the moment

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    1. Yamini says:
      October 15, 2017 at 3:11 pm

      I am glad you could relate 😊

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