I ponder over my life at night as I lay
Counting flaws, ignoring perfections
A lump in my throat grows bigger each day
Not a single vent for the piled up emotions
I choke over my thoughts yet again
A cyclone waiting to blast, ripping me out
Holding on for too long was the worst bargain
Been silent for too longβ¦prep for the final bout!
Strong poem but picture also
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Thank you π
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Beautiful. I love the picture too!!
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Thank you π
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You’re welcome!!
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Powerful expression, beautifully expressed.
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Thank you so much π
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That second line: “Counting flaws, ignoring perfections ” is the story of my life summed up in four words! Great poem!
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Thank you so much π I am glad you could relate
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Yours words always bring in so much in so little..i love the way you express your thoughts..I really learn alot from u!
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Thank you so much π your words encourage me!
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Amazing and heart-stopping!!
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Thank you π
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