Up and above the mystic skies
I am rising with every leap I take
With light glistening in my eyes, hope splurging
Towards a new beginning, hugging my freedom
As I near the emanating light, a thud stops me
There above the inviting skies is a barrier so rigid
It stops me midway with its stark terror
I bump, I struggle and an enclosure forms
It invites me in it, but is it the door?
Will I fly above or stay huddled in the safe zone?
Live Your Dreams 24/7 
Beautiful. I love how you did the ending. It was so wonderful. Beautiful piece my dear. Great choice on the picture.
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Thank you so much 😊
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You are so welcome!
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Intense poem. Flying above is better than being in the safe zone.
I would like to invite you to my monthly blog party taking place right now.
https://acookingpotandtwistedtales.com/2017/07/01/welcome-to-july-blog-party-book-cover-reveal/
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts and I would love to join you at the party, thank you 😊
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your poetry is ever enthralling ,small but sweet sonorous always.
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Thank you so much for the lovely feedback 😊
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you are welcome
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Poetry is easy to understand when it resonates with your own emotions. Thank you for this… 😍
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Thank you 😊 I am glad it resonated so well!!
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beautiful
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Thank you 😊
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I READ THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM AGAIN IT RESONATES THE FEELINGS VIBRANTLY.
THANKS FOR VISITING MY BLOGS.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Always welcome
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Sounds like you are on the verge of something…it’s funny these past few months I’ve been drawn to watching birds and their flight and imagining how freeing it must be to fly and swoop so carefree. Wouldn’t that be amazing if we could fly like a bird! Lovely poem.
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I like your thoughts about freedom and flying…😊 and thank you for stopping by
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Thank you. I was just outside watching a falcon flying way up high…it’s truly majestic watching them. It was my joy. 🙂
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Skies have always attracted me… most of us wish to have wings… but we are capable for something else and that is our path of life!
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You are so right. 🙂
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Great choice on the picture. Toll (*L*)
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😊😊😊 (*L*)!!
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