The Last Fall

Isn’t our life just like a board of chess?
No matter how hard we try, it remains a mess
For us who are alien to the rules of this life
End up drowning in a constant strife

You reward me with painful whips
And just a cry barely escapes my lips
Acceptance is the key they say, no point debating
But speaking my mind is my right, if not fighting

In this world of perfections, I am the odd one
Ready to bear with my unending flaws is none
I feel suffocated as I collapse in my own shell
A deep breath… and that was the last I ever fell…

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29 Comments Add yours

    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  1. Beautiful. I love the picture you chose.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you dear 😊

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      1. You are welcome my love.

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  2. This was lovely yet melancholy too. Ah, but that is life, isn’t it? Loved Your photo too!!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Like

  3. jerennazuto says:

    So damn beautiful! Speaking our mind and fighting for it, is our right! Don’t stay silent!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Yea true 😊 Thank you

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  4. Akhil Kumar says:

    That’s the voice of many! Well written!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  5. swalia says:

    Beautiful lines with a beautiful pic. Acceptance should not be passive. Accept things as they are and then take the required action.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Rightly said 😊 and thank you

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  6. Lovely! Beautiful! 😊

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  7. That’s just lovely!! Deep meanings and full of hope!!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  8. So unbelievably powerful. Thank you.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  9. Thank you so much for stopping by my Blog and deciding to Follow! I hope that you enjoy my visual art and poetry! You have a nice Blog and great poetry I decided to follow back! 😉

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  10. A sad picture of abuse. Victims are taught to feel inadequate, as if all others were “perfect”. Not all victims can endure long enough to recognize they deserve much more. ❤

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    1. Yamini says:

      That is a deep observation… you are so right, thank you for stopping by 😊

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  11. Deep, well written and a sweet rhyme.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

      Like

  12. Jeni G.J says:

    Loved this yamini💓💓💓

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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