The Naked Truth

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She shivers at the mere thought of facing it. Her feet stagger, limbs giving up on this strenuous task. And before she knew, her body crumpled into a heap. Her eyes have lost the strength to look up and are in a wait for the dark to set in. Hours go by without her getting back on her feet; she stays there in an unknown bliss. Something flashes, almost blinds her with its dazzle. She freezes on witnessing her doom. Her vulnerable naked body as reflected in the mirror unveils her ugly truth. Her fear had finally come true.

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25 Comments Add yours

  1. Words dripping with feelings amazing.❤❤❤

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  2. michnavs says:

    I can feel the bleeding emotions here…

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    1. Yamini says:

      I am glad you could relate 😊 thank you

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  3. Beautiful, amazing, and true! I love it. This is your best piece yet!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for all the love 😊

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      1. You are so welcome Yamini!!

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  4. aquibview says:

    I am missing something, BTW great thought? 🤔

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you and plz share any doubt you have😊

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you dear 😊

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      1. hati03nisa says:

        Most welcome dear

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  5. Chi! says:

    Nice. Nice!! Beautiful piece

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  6. Sherron0 says:

    Dark. A little haunting. And the perfect picture to go with it.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  7. Shayra says:

    Well written .Deep thoughts .I have nominated you for Liebster Award as I liked your write ups .They are unique.Have a visit to check 👍

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you for all the love 😊

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      1. Shayra says:

        Most Welcome 😆

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  8. Mr. Mel says:

    She is alone. Great photograph with a wonderful verse. Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  9. ceayr says:

    I quite like this, and I am reluctant to criticise on a first visit, but I think it would be much more powerful in the first person, like some of your other pieces.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Your views are welcome here and I do see a point there… maybe next time I’ll make it more powerful

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