Losing To The Devil

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She felt a tug at her collar, a quick glance revealed a dark shadow. She felt drawn to the hazy image; it had a gothic beauty that left her craving. She breathes in his scent. Mystified, she follows. Intoxicated by the power he holds, she gives in… to the devil!

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14 Comments Add yours

  1. shivamt25 says:

    Amazing read! Felt like I was reading an excerpt from Dorian Gray, or Dracula.

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    1. Yamini says:

      That was a huge compliment, thank you so much 🙂

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  2. N says:

    Oh I could feel the darkness and it’s lure… mystical!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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  3. Beautiful, raw, and cold. I love it. I got a chill reading it. I love it.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you for the lovely feedback 😊

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      1. You’re welcome my dear. You deserve it.

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  4. swalia says:

    Evil always has this strange allure. Well written!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

      Like

  5. hati03nisa says:

    This is such professional peace of work👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼👌🏼

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for the compliment 😊

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Sifar says:

    Consumed by devil and darkness!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Somehow we all are…

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