Ghost Of The Villa

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The villa at the end of the street was deserted, a strange silence hung in the air. He was warned against the haunted house and thus he had to step inside. Breaking rules had always tempted him and not once did he miss a chance to mess with the edict. But this time it was different…

He made a leisurely round through the house, constantly mumbling that he did not believe in ghosts. Nothing happened, not a sound and he confidently walked out with his notion backed up with proof. “Why the hell did you go inside the house and why were you blabbering to yourself” thundered his mother. “Come on ma, V is pretty and I just wanted to tell her that I am not scared of nonexistent people. So went there with her, I guess she’s impressed”. The gate closed all by itself and before he could say anything he read the cornerstone that read “constructed in 1960 by V”

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19 Comments Add yours

  1. Beautiful. I have to add this one to my favorites. It’s just raw, fresh, and real. I love it. Your pieces just get better and better. Love the picture you chose. It goes with the piece so well. Great insight. Great job. So proud of you!

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for the lovely feedback… I hope to write better and inspire!

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      1. You are so welcome my love. You are writing better and you are inspiring. Thanks for inspiring. Hugs!

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      2. Yamini says:

        🙂 means a lot

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  2. janahpinku says:

    You write so beautifully.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 🙂

      Like

  3. Sonia Sasi says:

    V probably wanted to show off her house. What with the rumors and all, no one ever visited her place!!
    Jokes apart, loved your way of writing. 🙂

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    1. Yamini says:

      Haha… I like that aspect… and thank you for the lovely feedback 😊

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  4. Wow I really enjoyed this! Amazing writing style.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  5. I really like
    ” live your dream 24/7 ”
    Sentence

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  6. 91coffeegirl says:

    That really creeped me 😅 I love horror stories 😊 you wrote it really well 😊

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊 I am glad you enjoyed

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  7. nathaswami says:

    What does it prove? Have we to take for granted that V took him inside and she was not known to him earlier?

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    1. Yamini says:

      Yes, he met V and in order to impress her walked into the villa and later realised that V was the ghost!

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  8. Kalama says:

    Lol..V is something else😂😂

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    1. Yamini says:

      Well here it refers to the name of the ghost…

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