A Walk Gone Wrong

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“One moment she was here and the next, she was gone poof! That’s exactly how our 5 year old vanished.” sobbed the mother. At a first glance it looked like a typical case of kidnapping for a ransom so they decided to wait for the phone call with thumping hearts! The call never came, she was gone forever…

There a little girl was upset with her parents scolding and decided to start a journey away from home with her only faithful companion, Mr Teddy. After a while she had wanted to go home and a ‘kind’ stranger promised to take her back. He took her to a new home with a new life and a new her.

Years later the couple was approached by a blind little girl begging for food. “Our daughter would have been the same age, here’s some money for you” pitied the woman. Only the stars realized the connection between them and drifted silently…

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21 Comments Add yours

  1. extremely heart-wrenching 😦

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 🙂

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      1. You are most welcome 🙂

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  2. wow this played with my emotions

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    1. Yamini says:

      🙂 I am glad you liked it…thank you!

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  3. Beautiful. I love it. I have to put this one in my top five favorite posts!!

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    1. Yamini says:

      That’s very sweet of you…thank you 🙂

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      1. Aww thanks. You are welcome.

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  4. Enigma says:

    Heart wrenching!

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    1. Yamini says:

      😊 thank you for appreciating my work!

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  5. Great build up in this sad flash fiction. And I love the quote you have for a header.

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much for the lovely feedback 😊

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  6. Beautiful. This reminds me of Rohinton Mistry somehow 🙂

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    1. Yamini says:

      I am glad you liked it and thank you for the lovely connection 😊

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      1. Yes he is lovely isn’t he? His books are so poignant. They make me so wistful.

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      2. Yamini says:

        Indeed they are 🙂

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you 😊

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  7. Extremely heart touching!! Lovely

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    1. Yamini says:

      Thank you so much 😊

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