50 Word Story

Her Lonely Day(s)

Posted by Yamini on

She lay silently on her bed, nobody to disturb her, none to wake her up. Today nobody will come. A day to enjoy her own company, maybe that’s not what she wants. Tears roll down her cheeks as she looks at her paralyzed lower body.

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  1. jackcollier7 says:
    January 16, 2017 at 7:36 pm

    Brutal, poignant, sad ❤

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    1. Yamini says:
      January 17, 2017 at 4:38 am

      Sad is the reality of life!!

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  2. rogermoorepoet says:
    January 17, 2017 at 1:17 pm

    Very disturbing. Powerful punch line though.

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    1. Yamini says:
      January 17, 2017 at 2:51 pm

      Thank you 😊 and it was a disturbing story indeed

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  3. sahil1137 says:
    January 18, 2017 at 5:24 am

    Nice one and read this hope like it http://wp.me/p8dK6y-z

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    1. Yamini says:
      January 18, 2017 at 8:08 am

      Sure i will!

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  4. LiteraryFuzz says:
    January 18, 2017 at 7:31 pm

    A story with a sting. Those were a fantastic 50 words!

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    1. Yamini says:
      January 19, 2017 at 6:57 am

      Thank you 🙂

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